初一英语作文范文60词

初一英语作文范文

题目：My Best Friend

I have many friends, but Lily is my best friend. She is a girl of thirteen. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and a small nose. Her hair is long and black. She is very kind and helpful. She often helps me with my homework. We study English together every day. I like to play with her after school. I think she is a great friend.

写作要点

1. 简单句型：使用简单句表达核心意思，避免复杂结构。
2. 描述性词汇：用形容词描述人物特征，如tall, thin, kind等。
3. 日常活动：描述共同完成的日常活动，如study English, play together。

学习建议

1. 积累词汇：多记常用形容词和动词，如help, study, play。
2. 固定搭配：掌握常用短语，如best friend, after school。
3. 逻辑清晰：先介绍朋友特征，再描述关系和活动。

纠错后句摘录

原文："She is a girl of thirteen." 修改后："She is thirteen years old." 点评：用完整表达年龄更自然，避免数字后直接跟单位。