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初一英语作文范文
题目:My Best Friend
I have many friends, but Lily is my best friend. She is a girl of thirteen. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and a small nose. Her hair is long and black. She is very kind and helpful. She often helps me with my homework. We study English together every day. I like to play with her after school. I think she is a great friend.
写作要点
- 简单句型:使用简单句表达核心意思,避免复杂结构。
- 描述性词汇:用形容词描述人物特征,如tall, thin, kind等。
- 日常活动:描述共同完成的日常活动,如study English, play together。
学习建议
- 积累词汇:多记常用形容词和动词,如help, study, play。
- 固定搭配:掌握常用短语,如best friend, after school。
- 逻辑清晰:先介绍朋友特征,再描述关系和活动。
纠错后句摘录
原文:"She is a girl of thirteen." 修改后:"She is thirteen years old." 点评:用完整表达年龄更自然,避免数字后直接跟单位。